When we were asked to write
an essay over “TV’s Negative Influence on Kinds Reaffirmed,” the first thing I
did was to read over the article multiple times. As I read through the article I
looked for the stance that McCall made and what his theory was. I then
highlighted all important information I found so I could use it later. For our
assignment we were put in a rhetorical situation where we had to take a stance
on the topic and back it up with personal experiences. After I read “The
Rhetorical Situation” from Purdue’s Owl, an implied rhetorical situation is to
not get influenced by the author’s viewpoint, but to come up with your own
reasons and opinions about the topic. When I first started reading the article I
did not have a stance on the issue but as I kept reading I was leaning more
towards McCall. When I was beginning to start my paper I thought about what
McCall said and then I thought about what the opposing side would have to say
to him. Most of McCall’s points were hard to argue against and to find a way to
contradict them so I ended up agreeing with him.
When I was writing my
paper I was having a hard time finding personal experiences to go with why I agreed
with McCall. What I kept thinking about when I thinking of personal experiences
was that only my teacher was going to be reading it so I did not need to have
that persuasive of a paper. When I could not think of any personal experiences I
pointed out facts from the article that McCall found and used them as why I agreed
with him. I knew by doing that I was not going to get back a very good recommendation
paper. I know I am a better writer than that but I did not want to take the
time do the paper the way it was supposed to be done. When I received my
recommendation paper I was not surprised by the comments I got because I knew
what I did wrong and I should have fixed them. From what I have read for the
presentation I would not make the same choices. First, I would of the followed the
directions better. Second, I would have actually taken the time to do the paper
instead of waiting last minute to get it done. Lastly, I would have just made
up personal experiences instead of not following the directions.
-Megan Grimes (422 words)
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