Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Obama Email

When you think of the president of the United States you think professionalism,  intelligence, well somewhat, dedicated, or even organized. President Barack Obama has apparently sent an email in December to Marla Jarmer stating that he would like her to donate 3 dollars or more that night the email had been sent and gave a link to his website. He never stated though what the money would be going towards. Would this money be going to a charity? Perhaps the donations will be going to his campaign? No one can be sure because he wasn't being clear. Coming from the President you think he would be making a more clearer statement if he intends to get re-elected soon. This country wants some one who is organized, confident and shows leadership and can send a professional email. Not to mention in the beginning of his email he implied that Marla Jarmer was his friend, without ever meeting her. To start an email off as friend would imply that you personally know who you are talking to and have met them in person a time or two. More than likely that was the Presidents way of opening up and being friendly, but is that very professional coming from Mr. Barack? Or has the President hired someone else to write this email. How do we know for sure that he was the one who personally sat down and typed this email and sent it out. More than likely this was an email that was assigned for a team member on his campaign to send out to certain recipients. This email did not get a point across besides that they wanted 3 dollars. At the end of the email it was signed To 2012, Barack. No thank you or anything. A more business practical way of ending an email would be Kindest Regards, Sincerely, or even Thanks. If this wasn't the president sending out this email then he should really take a better look at his staff. They clearly cant write and their not doing a good job at presenting the President in a professional manner. Personally if this email had been sent to me I would have deleted it instantly and marked it as spam. It's sketchy and lacks professionalism. Better luck next time Barak.

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